lilithkduat's reviews
66 reviews

I was given a copy by the author in exchange for an honest review

I enjoyed this book. The sex scenes were really hot, and playful and respectful. There was a lot of love and understanding. It had this Hippie Free-Love vibe too it, which was fun and I hadn't encountered that before in my erotica reads. Also, a guy gives a chick oral and his tongue is pierced. That is always fun. Also, sleep-groping.

However, what initially drew me to this story was the premise. The world is a zombie infested nightmare and three survivors are trapped together. Unfortunately the story barely touches on that. The zombies could have been anything: A mudslide, a blizzard. If you're going to select an unrealistic premise, no matter what you write, erotica or not, commit to it. We're writers, we can write anything! Indulge!

For example, Isadora is married to Jacob but their best friend Samuel is also living with them because zombies. Sometimes the horde moves on and the survivors can do things like collect river water and firewood. Maybe Sam went out to hunt or something and almost gets bit, there's a scare, and it helps Issy and Sam realize how much they want each other and should take advantage of the time they have together and that sparks all the wild threesome sex.

It was good, I liked it, but I see potential for more which I hope the author will take advantage of.

A quick, sexy story. The descriptions were vivid and scenarios really hot. I would have liked a bit more in last scene, a bit too much telling than showing, and it could have had one more glance over for spelling errors, but it was a fun little tale.

This is in serious need of an editor. For some reason the author put a space before almost every punctuation mark. It was really distracting and made it hard to get into the story.

Like the first book in this series of shorts, the same editing and punctuation problems exist. For some reason the author put a space before almost every punctuation mark. It was really distracting and made it hard to get into the story.

Also, this book contains the phrase "Ginormous boobies".

But I still wanna read the third one when it comes out, because hot Anubis threesome is implied and I need more of that in my life.

I liked it! I found the situation and set up very, very hot and hit a lot of my kinks.
However, in the second half of the story, it seems Leia Castle got a little too involved in the hotness and was making mistakes like 'hip' instead of 'hips', forgetting words, or getting too repetitive in her word usage.

So, the story could use another look-over. After a cold shower.

But, if all you want is a quick, somewhat dangerous story during some alone time, give it a try. It's dirty fun.

I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.

I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.

I want a sequel, immediately.

I liked the opening, I liked how both flippant and casual Vanessa was when she first encounters Santiago. I liked the little goth touches to Vanessa, like painting her cigarettes with lipstick. I found that very cool and creative.

I wish the erotic scenes, while very, very fun were a little more creative in their poses. He's an old vampire, get a little crazy!


Most of all, I have so many questions about Santiago, about Vanessa, about Juliette and more. I want to experience both Vanessa's and Santiago's tragic pasts. It's hinted at, but I want the juicy, gory details. I feel there's a rich vampire culture and Ms. Sinclair has teased her readers by just scratching the surface.
This is why I hope there will be a follow up some day.

A girl can dream.

There were some tiny writing hiccups, like some of the word usage was repetitive, and there were one or two spelling errors here and there but no one catches everything and it shouldn't affect the experience of reading this story.

One to add to the annals of vampire erotica.

So here I am, happily enjoying this story when in the middle of the penultimate sex scene, brother says "You're as tight as a baby, aren't you?"

WHEN DID THIS SUDDENLY BECOME A SERBIAN FILM?!

I was somewhere between laughing and groaning in shock. Took me a while to recover from that.

Other than that huge moment of what the fuckery, I actually liked it for the most part.