Like the first book in this series of shorts, the same editing and punctuation problems exist. For some reason the author put a space before almost every punctuation mark. It was really distracting and made it hard to get into the story.

Also, this book contains the phrase "Ginormous boobies".

But I still wanna read the third one when it comes out, because hot Anubis threesome is implied and I need more of that in my life.