Maybe my reading comprehension sucks, but I definitely had to re read the first 30% of the book to understand what the hell was happening. BUT. Overall it's not a bad lesbian sci-fi model at conception. I think, the most frustrating part of this book is that even though its two separate authors writing two separate POVs, the tones for them are almost identical. Who can watch a person fall in love with themselves??? Narcissus' metamorphosis was notoriously boring. the prose was just okay