With an interesting hook The Turnaway Girls promises to be an enchanting tale to read. Unfortunately with it being so verbose and descriptive the plot threads are weighted down by it all. When it all comes together in the end, all the loose threads that you where given, it makes a good tale, but to get there takes some time. Long winded in some parts other just small scraps of info that don't make sense until the end, The Turnaway Girls stumbles it's way along until the end.