The story is more of a slice of life with Skyclan. There is no main problem going on. The events that seem like they maybe the main conflict in the book don’t show up that much. It was kinda boring. I think some issues within the clan were never fully solved. Most of the characters are boring except for Leafstar. I wish Stick and Red were developed more.

Sharpclaw was getting annoying with him challenging Leafstar all the time over every decision Leafstar made. I think he should have got demoted at one point. I don’t even know if Leafstar has even been talking to Sharpclaw about this. She keeps on telling herself that she will but she never does on page. Even if he was trying to make the clan stronger he should done it in private. He was making decisions for Leafstar and challenging her in public. It could make Leafstar look like a bad leader.

Also I am tired of Spottedleaf popping up everywhere. She isn’t even Skyclan. Why can’t past Skyclan cats do more? Cloudstar or Skywatcher could have been a good one.  

At the end the book does the thing of living in a clan is the only way to go and whenever they help out cats they push them to live just like then. Then if the group does not live like then the clan cats look down on them. This is part of the reason that i don’t like it when clan cats go to help other cats that are not clan cats. In this book it wasn’t until the end that we got to even see the group so it was hard for me to care about them or fully understand why they had to seek clan cats for help. 

I’m glad that some part mostly at the end Skyclan does its own thing different from other clans. It is only a few things though. If the authors allowed it i think Skyclan could have been really different than the other clans since there are no other clans living around.