things that bugged me.
1) there were large gaps between every paragraph, and the same size gap is used no matter the break between paragraph, character switch, or time jump. it was jarring and confusing.
multiple pov changes in chapters between characters.
and tonight is always spelled in two words.

2) there are tons of side characters, and because ( this is my bad) I read book two first, I was really confused about who everyone was.

3) there isn't as much love in this / series as I would prefer.

4) Georgian fashion. again, my bad, but I just has a terribly hard time trying to get behind a hero that wears high heels.

5) this annoying lack of basic communication between a couple married for four years, and who supposedly loved each other from day one. glad it worked out. but still.

things I liked.
1) the hero. John flech.

2) the secondary story between villiers and fettlock.

3) the friendship between the women in this book. poppy and jemma specifically.