A review by cassie12_21
Black Onyx by Nikita Parmenter

2.0

I like the plot and characters, but this needed at least two more rounds of editing. There were a lot of basic mistakes. 

Mild relationship spoilers: 
the relationship is very slow burn, but they become friends quickly and they only bully her like once, the cranky one is reluctant towards her and insults her but its not for long and its not deep
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