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dynamicdevon's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
My biggest issue was Elsie's complete and total lack of any ability to communicate whatsoever. When the plot would come to a raging halt if everyone just sat down and had a good DTR (define the relationship), the rest of the book loses verve. I get that it's young people and all, but even after her friend tells her to be honest, it goes nowhere. That being said, it is a pretty accurate depiction of young queer love where the people involved have no idea what they're doing.
Also, where did the poetry go? I feel like the second half would have been stronger if the poems had kept appearing.
While it seems a lot of people didn't like the ending, I thought it fit with the book. There's a lot of tough shit going on in life and ending the book while that tough shit is going on seemed apropos to me.
Graphic: Drug use, Sexual content, Car accident, and Alcohol
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders and Classism
Minor: Infidelity
the_lesbrarian's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Sexual content, Car accident, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Drug use, Homophobia, Infidelity, and Toxic relationship
serendipitysbooks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, and Car accident
messymimms's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Homophobia, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Car accident, and Abandonment
Moderate: Drug use, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Grief, and Classism
melodyseestrees's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Drug use, Sexual content, and Car accident
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders, Grief, and Alcohol
Minor: Infidelity, Blood, Pregnancy, and Injury/Injury detail
noah_silver's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Sexual content, Grief, Car accident, and Alcohol
nerdysread's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
Parts were unnecessary. One last thing, the MC was 😬 most of the time. Like go get therapy girl
Graphic: Sexual content, Toxic relationship, and Car accident
Moderate: Drug use, Panic attacks/disorders, Medical content, and Grief
drawahardline's review against another edition
- Strong character development? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Drug use, Sexual content, and Car accident
Moderate: Death
kneebees's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Minor: Child abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Medical content, Grief, Pregnancy, and Injury/Injury detail
aishallnot's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
I enjoy a good coming of age story, especially when the mc is in their 20s. This i think was a decent debut but i kinda have mixed feelings.
First, i love how diverse this book with the characters. I feel like this definitely served a purpose in regards to the ethnic backgrounds of the characters as well as the queer community in london. Elsie is definitely going through it (though she can be hard to root for at times) and it was refreshing to see how she has people that she can reach to for support besides her family. She's very close with her grandmother and i loved seeing that relationship whenever she was showcased. I also liked maggie and how she was almost like an auntie to elsie and encouraged to use her gift of her writing as well as her voice (something her grandmother also strongly instilled in her) .
Speaking of which, i definitely related to elsie at times in terms of not being openly vulnerable and even wanting to become a best selling poet/writer. i loved how she has the determination to go after what she wants and expresses herself through writing instead of speaking (i definitely do that 😭).
Now, here's where some things fell short. I feel like plot wise,
The writing was fine and easy to read (not a lot jargon-y words), but i kinda wish there was more showing how the characters feel than telling. Especially with a book so written emotion heavy, i feel that we didn't get to see that until the end.
Lastly, there were some plot points and even like 1-2 characters i wish were shown more.
Again i think this is a decent debut and i don't think its a bad book. I just felt there was something missing within the story and now finishing it i can think what could have been added. I heard the author has another book so I'm intrigued to see what she will wrote next.
Graphic: Sexual content and Car accident
Moderate: Alcohol
Minor: Blood